What a wonderful description of Evan's first year in Atlantis. I think you've really nailed the characterizations here. I love the Evan/David friendship and Evan seeking out both Ronon and Teyla for adivce.

"You keep trying to fit Milky Way pegs into Atlantis-shaped holes."

"I'm sorry, but Milky Way pegs are all I have to work with."

What a perfect description of a new transfer to Atlantis.

Also? The sketch of Evan Solo is my favorite :)