ext_47867 ([identity profile] sherry57.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] slashing_lorne 2010-11-14 08:18 am (UTC)

I was hoping someone would be inspired by the manip to write something and boy, were you inspired!!!! Really great story and sooo sexy. I loved how John went from not sure about the whole thing, to enjoying Evan's attention......a lot. And Evan's vulnerability turning to controlling everything....so good.....the switching from 'Colonel' to 'John' showing the different levels of relationship, nicely done.
Thanks for this....now that dildo....inspiration???

John’s eyes snapped open in the dark room, his gaze flicking fearfully down at Evan’s dark head, nestled so innocently on his chest. “G’night, Colonel.”.....sweet

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