Thank you! I loved the source material and had to write this. Unfortunately, I have to leave a lot out because I didn't want to mirror Lorne after Anton, but keep both. This is set in the same universe as the film/book, hopefully I won't screw it up too bad.

Don't worry, I am working on part 2. I am adding a few scenes that help explain somethings without going into too great a detail. This isn't an episode, I can drag out the explanation over several parts without sacrificing plot for time.

Thank you for that. I will be continuing this after all. It was just discouraging, because usually, if you don't get feed back in the first 24 hours, you get nothing.