ext_19136 ([identity profile] helenkacan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] slashing_lorne 2011-12-04 12:50 am (UTC)

You ARE writing magic. I'm certainly spellbound.

I love the fact that the reader suspects what's going on (Jumper IS John) long before it actually happens.

But ::wibbles:: you've spelled one name wrong. It should be "Kolya" i/o "Koyla". Check it for yourself here: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001108/ [BTW, Kolya and Teyla seem to be the most misspelled names (with transposed middle letters) in SGA!Verse fanfic.]

As a more deliberate spelling variation, ::giggles:: you could have spelled "genii" as "djinn-ai" to conform to your magic-filled realm.

::returns to dreaming in your 'Verse::

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