FIC: Loss (100 word drabble)

[denyce.livejournal.com]

Title: Loss
Fandom: SGA
Pairing :Lorne/Sheppard
Rating: G
Summary/note: slashing_lorne Feb's 100 word drabble challenge


Rejected, Evan sat staring out into the horizon dumbfounded. Earlier his day started out with the ‘It’s not you it’s me’ speech. Like that’s suppose to justify being dumped. Because that’s what it was. It didn’t matter that he knew the truth had seen it—felt it, but at the time he had refused to acknowledge it. Had believed he could change things change John—not be his substitute. Mistakenly overlooked the signs, the increased tension and smoldering looks between them.

It didn’t matter how he would replayed everything, in the end he was here—alone mending a broken heart.

Comments

[drkcherry.livejournal.com]

Awwwh, who the hell did John dump Lorne for?

[denyce.livejournal.com]

Left it open for whoever you *the reader* wanted to either love or hate for Lorne's poor broken heart, so you tell me ;-)

[partofthequeue2.livejournal.com]

Oh Evan! Let me give you a hug!

Great drabble.

[denyce.livejournal.com]

*nods* yes he needs lots of *hugs* {{thanks}}

[sarspasm.livejournal.com]

Awww, the poor baby! He's not worth it, honey, he's a man-whore of the first degree. You'll find someone better. *cuddles him*

[denyce.livejournal.com]

he's a man-whore of the first degree Heehee

You'll find someone better Better & more worthy, nods!

{{thanks!}}

[kensieg.livejournal.com]

Evan don't break your heart over John! David(Parrish)is waiting for you!

[vagablonde.livejournal.com]

Did I mention how great this was????

[denyce.livejournal.com]

*Nods* yes you did over on my lj--but thank you again!

Surprisingly in a good mood, & other than laundry going to work on a few Lorne pieces, hopefully I’ll have something for you soon :-)