Amazing work for someone new to Photoshop! And I love the pictures you chose... the expressions on both are so complicated, and from your description, match the story very well.
One -tiny- critique? I think it should be "yesterdays" with no apostrophe. I'm also not sure about the comma in that line but I'm not as good with commas... maybe check with a beta?
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Date: 2011-01-21 05:03 am (UTC)One -tiny- critique? I think it should be "yesterdays" with no apostrophe. I'm also not sure about the comma in that line but I'm not as good with commas... maybe check with a beta?