I love the fact that the reader suspects what's going on (Jumper IS John) long before it actually happens.
But ::wibbles:: you've spelled one name wrong. It should be "Kolya" i/o "Koyla". Check it for yourself here: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001108/ [BTW, Kolya and Teyla seem to be the most misspelled names (with transposed middle letters) in SGA!Verse fanfic.]
As a more deliberate spelling variation, ::giggles:: you could have spelled "genii" as "djinn-ai" to conform to your magic-filled realm.
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Date: 2011-12-04 12:50 am (UTC)I love the fact that the reader suspects what's going on (Jumper IS John) long before it actually happens.
But ::wibbles:: you've spelled one name wrong. It should be "Kolya" i/o "Koyla". Check it for yourself here: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001108/ [BTW, Kolya and Teyla seem to be the most misspelled names (with transposed middle letters) in SGA!Verse fanfic.]
As a more deliberate spelling variation, ::giggles:: you could have spelled "genii" as "djinn-ai" to conform to your magic-filled realm.
::returns to dreaming in your 'Verse::